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Saturday, May 27, 2006
Double Positive
All I could see...
Was a fun and fear-filled...
Fantasy...
I just didn’t see you...
Standing there...
Calm and bare,
But...
When my resolution...
Strengthened,
You gradually, began...
To appear.
And when you...
Both...
Spoke to me...
You told me:
I had a Sister...
And you told me:
I had a Lover...
I just didn’t see...
You...
Standing there
© Lou Sid Linesman, 2006. All Rights Reserved.
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Lou's running out of ideas! I think he could use some new material! His alliteration has gone way over the top, his rhythm's completely gone, the vocabulary is getting more and more restricted and nothing seems to rhyme anymore - poor guy!
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