lou sid lines

Your poems, I like some - maybe two, maybe three,
They're simple and honest - what poetry should be,
I always admired that you penned them at all,
Unexpressive was I, a tightly-wound ball.
You've got a few lyrics that work a real dream,
That 'vibe' - your description was quite, quite supreme,
And those new ones that tell how you’re lonesome in bed,
They worked one wicked spell which just messed with my head!
But I ought not compare them to what I now write,
My old stuff, you see, was a great heap of shite!
Oh you think I'm insane 'cause I love you so true?
Well that says less about me, dear,..... and more about you!!!


© Lou Sid Linesman, 2006. All Rights Reserved.

Posted by: lou sid linesman / Tuesday, January 31, 2006